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    Harvard: Future Use of Education

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    Harvard
    Word count
    144 / 150 words
    Prompt
    How do you hope to use your Harvard education?

    Last summer, I sat across from Mrs. Alvarez at the food pantry while she explained, in careful Spanish, that her insulin had jumped to $340 a month. I'd come to translate. I left wondering why a retired seamstress in Trenton was rationing medicine that costs $6 to manufacture.

    I want to spend my life answering questions like that one. At Harvard, I hope to study economics and global health, learning the math behind drug pricing and the policy levers that could move it.

    Eventually I want to work on pharmaceutical access policy, maybe at a place like PIH or in public service. I don't think Mrs. Alvarez should have to choose.

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